[OSM-legal-talk] [DRAFT] Contributor Terms 1.2

Frederik Ramm frederik at remote.org
Wed Nov 17 07:32:21 GMT 2010


Richard,

On 11/17/10 03:30, Richard Weait wrote:
> There have been several revisions to a new draft of the Contributor
> Terms from the LWG over the last few meetings.
> https://docs.google.com/View?id=dd9g3qjp_933xs7nvfb

The language sounds more human now which is good. I like it how parts of 
the document now say "We..." instead of "OSMF...". However this has not 
been done consistently, e.g. it should read "you grant us..." instead 
"you grant OSMF..." in clause 2.

There's a stray "or more" at the end of clause 5.

Bye
Frederik



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