[talk-au] Need help wording flyier

[b.schulz.10 at scu.edu.au]

Just a minor note: The tracks in the Glenrock State Recreation Area are closed to public vehicles so it's more accurate to mention that link in relation to bushwalking and MTB riding than 4WD'ing. Oh, and they're more "detailed" than "accurate". It's a shame that the "shortlink" links are so cryptic. It would be nice if they were something a bit more user friendly such as a series of digits but we can't do anything about that.

Also, I think the 5th paragraph would read better if the 2nd sentence read "...stifle this kind of innovation due to restrictive licensing." as the phrase "of the data" is used at the end of both sentences in that paragraph.

In the last paragraph giving contact details it's probably better to write in 3rd person rather than 1st. ie: change "...or contact me directly..." to "...or contact John directly...".

Overall it looks good though. Love the road painting graphic :).

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From: John Smith <delta_foxtrot at yahoo.com>
Date: Saturday, August 1, 2009 11:45 pm
Subject: Re: [talk-au] Need help wording flyier
To: talk-au at openstreetmap.org

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> Thanks to Liz for the layout, here's the current draft:
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> http://maps.bigtincan.com/data/nambour_flier.pdf
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